Renee

13/10/10   Proof Reading and Editing

**# 1 At the Supermarket** The passage needs 23 **capital letters**, 15 full stops , 4 commas and 2 question marks. Highlight 5 common nouns and 5 proper nouns.

**R** obert and **J** odie live in **N** ewcastle. **O** ne **S** aturday morning they went shopping with their parents. **T** hey went to a big supermarket. **R** obert pushed the shopping trolley. **T** hey bought bread, milk , tea , jam , fruit and vegetables. **S** uddenly mother looked up. **W** here was **J** odie ? **S** he had become separated from the family. **M** other went to the desk. **T** he lady there made an announcement over the loudspeaker. **S** oon **J** odie came to the desk. **W** here had she been ? **S** he had been reading books in the book department. **M** other was pleased to see her daughter at last. **N** ow it was time to go home. **D** ad started the car and off they went. **I** t had been a busy day.

 By Renee and Paige

media type="file" key="Renee my Feeling .mov" width="300" height="300" Taupo We arrived in Taupo and we went straight to our friends Todd and Rays.

We stayed there for the night when we arrived there I was thinking that there house was small and cozy but it was a humungous two story house. They had two kids called Ashton and Cole .The next day we played on a mini quad bike that is like a motorbike but with 4 wheels. When Todd and Ray first lived there they went for a walk and found a motorbike track so we went there and I was going really really fast. We had to leave I was sad